STAR HardProbes PWG

[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yang,

please find below my additional comments to your nice abstract.

- L5: strong interaction -> strong interactions

- L5: quark and gluon -> quarks and gluons

- L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei -> such as Au+Au or Pb+Pb

- L11: its collectively phenomenon assembles -> collective phenomena observed in these small systems resemble

- L13: system -> systems

- L17: for different jet radii -> you can add here values or R

- L18 using anti-kT -> using the anti-kT

Cheers,

Barbara

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 11:56 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Yang,

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

Title: "hadron+Jet " -> hadron +jet ; "collisions at 200 GeV" ->
"collisions at $\sqrt{s_\mathrm{NN}}$ = 200 GeV"
      "with the STAR experiment" -> "by STAR" or "in STAR"

L5: "To study the strong interaction …" -> This sentence is not
required.
L7-9: "Jet quenching,…" -> "Jet quenching, modification of the jet
properties arising from the jet-medium interaction in QGP, has been
observed in high energy heavy-ion collisions, such as, Au+Au and Pb+Pb.
L11: "…as its collectively phenomenon assembles those in large systems."
-> Not clear, please rephrase this.
L12:"This research aims at studying jet quenching in a …" -> "Jet
quenching measurement in a relatively smaller collision system ( Zr+Zr
and Ru+Ru) compared to Au+Au collisions at RHIC gives an insight to the
system size and path length dependence of parton energy loss."
L18-20: "This measurement will …" -> Not sure that be the case or not.
Please drop this sentence.
Instead, please mention the kinematic range and what observables you
want to present.


Cheers
Nihar

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