STAR HardProbes PWG

[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Yang,

   Please find some comments from me to your nice abstract

L5: This sentence can be removed

L9: Remove nuclei

L11: as the collectivity phenomenon observed in these collisions resembles that observed in 

L12: This study

L12: relatively

L16: report on the

L18: I dont think the isobar measurements will provide information on disappearance of jet quenching and its not clear what observations you are referring to here. Better to rephrase as will provide information on the system size dependence of jet quenching and in-medium jet modification 

thanks

Sooraj

On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 3:40 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Yang,

Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

- General: It is not clear what you are going to measure in this analysis. It would be good to specify what variable(s). 

- Title: hadron+Jet --> hadron+jet

- L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei --> such as Au or Pb

- L12: This research --> This analysis

- L14: compare to the one mentioned above --> compare to the aforementioned ones

Cheers,

Yi

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Yang He (yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a review, 
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