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[yanghe <yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Nihar,

Thank you for your comments. I have updated it. Please have a look.
In L10, I was trying to say "collectivity phenomenon observed in small 
collisions resembles collectivity phenomenon observed in large systems."

Best,
Yang

在 2022-11-30 12:32，Nihar Sahoo 写道：
> Hello Yang,
>
> Please my additional comment on your abstract.
>
> L7: "…collisions, such as, Au+Au and Pb+Pb." -> "…collisions, such as
> Au+Au and Pb+Pb."
> L8: "in small systems, e.g. proton-nucleus collisions, …" -> "… in
> small systems, e.g., proton-nucleus collisions, …"
> L10: "…resembles that observed in …" -> "…that observed in …"
> L11:" …a relatively smaller collision systems " -> " … relatively
> smaller collision systems "
> L13: "Utilizing mixed-event …" -> "Utilizing the mixed-event …"
> L15:"… will report on the measurement …" -> "…will report the 
> measurement …"
> L16:"…jet radii R …" -> "… jet radii…"
> L17: "…algorithm. Results…" -> "…algorithm.  The trigger hadrons are
> selected between transverse momentum 7 and X GeV/c. Results…" (add
> this sentence and put your upper limit of trigger hadron at "X")
> L18: "fully corrected jet yield (Y…) integrated…" -> "fully corrected
> per trigger jet yield integrated" (drop Y(pT); not used further)
> L19: "…and jet quenching observables I_CP ….-> " and their relative
> suppression in central to peripheral collisions at mid-rapidity and
> jet transverse momentum up to 30 GeV/c."
>
> Cheers
> Nihar
>
> On 2022-11-30 09:15, yanghe wrote:
> > Dear conveners,
> >
> > Thank you all for your comments. I've updated the abstract. Please 
> > have a look.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Yang
> >
> >
> > 在 2022-11-30 09:37，Sooraj Radhakrishnan via Star-hp-l 写道：
> > > Hi Yang,
> > >    Please find some comments from me to your nice abstract
> > >
> > > L5: This sentence can be removed
> > > L9: Remove nuclei
> > > L11: as the collectivity phenomenon observed in these collisions
> > > resembles that observed in
> > > L12: This study
> > > L12: relatively
> > > L16: report on the
> > > L18: I dont think the isobar measurements will provide information on
> > > disappearance of jet quenching and its not clear what observations 
> > > you
> > > are referring to here. Better to rephrase as will provide information
> > > on the system size dependence of jet quenching and in-medium jet
> > > modification
> > >
> > > thanks
> > > Sooraj
> > >
> > > On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 3:40 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l
> > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Hi Yang,
> > > >
> > > > Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments
> > > > for your consideration.
> > > > - General: It is not clear what you are going to measure in this
> > > > analysis. It would be good to specify what variable(s).
> > > > - Title: hadron+Jet --> hadron+jet
> > > > - L9: such as Au or Pb nuclei --> such as Au or Pb
> > > > - L12: This research --> This analysis
> > > > - L14: compare to the one mentioned above --> compare to the
> > > > aforementioned ones
> > > >
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > Yi
> > > >
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> > > > On Mon, Nov 21, 2022 at 11:24 AM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
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> > > >
> > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > >
> > > > > Yang He (yanghe AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a
> > > > > review,
> > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61792
> > > > >
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> > > Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> > >
> > > Research Scientist,
> > > Department of Physics
> > >
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> > >  Kent, OH 44243
> > >
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