STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Andrew,

Thank you for addressing my additional comment. I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-11-30 16:06, Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Sooraj,
>
> Thank you for the comments.
> L22: Done
> L23: I removed the kinematic range
> L25: Removed ", a monte carlo event generator"
> L27: I removed the kinematic range, and rephrased the last sentence to
> "..., which will provide information about how the quark-gluon plasma
> interacts with the jet differently across the angular scales covered
> by the EEC."  Please let me know if this sounds better.
>
> Best,
> Andrew
>
> On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 8:26 PM Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi Andrew,
> > Thanks for preparing this nice abstract. Please find a few
> > comments from me below
> >
> > L22: in p+p collisions --> p+p collisions
> > L23: GeV/c (not as a fraction). Do you want to specify the kinematic
> > range in the abstract?
> > L25: I dont think you need to define PYTHIA6 for HP abstract
> > L27: scale dependence of the QGP doesnt read right, what do you
> > refer to here? Modification from QGP at different length/angular
> > scales? Should rephrase if so
> >
> > thanks
> > Sooraj
> >
> > On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 12:00 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > > Hello Andrew,
> > >
> > > Thank you for implementing my comments.
> > > I have a few additional comments below.
> > >
> > > L6: "Other time information" Not clear what is other time besides
> > > "split
> > > formation time" ?
> > > L23: "The response of the EEC to selections on jet pT …. 15
> > > GeV/c to 50
> > > GeV/c" ->" The EEC of full jet pT will be shown in a kinematic
> > > range
> > > from 15 to 50 GeV/$\it c$ using the STAR barrel calorimeter
> > > detectors
> > > and time projection chamber. "
> > > L25: "… PYTHIA 6, a Monte Carlo event generator." -> "…
> > > PYTHIA-6."  (If
> > > it is STAR tune, then mention it please)
> > >
> > > Cheers
> > > Nihar
> > >
> > > On 2022-11-29 01:14, Andrew Tamis wrote:
> > > > Hello Barbara and Nihar
> > > >
> > > > Thank you for the comments!  I have implemented both of your
> > > > suggestions.  I included split formation time as an example of
> > > time
> > > > information that soft drop and the lund plane extract.  I have
> > > also
> > > > listed PYTHIA 6 as the monte carlo generator I am using for
> > > > comparisons.
> > > >
> > > > Please let me know if you have any more comments
> > > >
> > > > Best,
> > > > Andrew
> > > >
> > > > On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 6:07 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Hello Andrew,
> > > > >
> > > > > Please find my comment on your nice abstract.
> > > > >
> > > > > L6: "extract time information " -> please mention what time
> > > > > information.
> > > > > Do you mean "formation time of parton shower" ?
> > > > > L12:"…  jet evolution .." -> the jet evolution
> > > > > L14: "infrared and collinear " -> "infrared-and-collinear "
> > > > > L21: "data from" -> "the data from";  "in p+p collisions"
> > > > > L22: for the detector effect;
> > > > > "a Monte Carlo event generator " -> better to mention what are
> > > > > those
> > > > > generators or models?
> > > > >
> > > > > Please give some information how do you select jet in pp and
> > > what
> > > > > kinematic range you plan to present.
> > > > >
> > > > > Cheers
> > > > > Nihar
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2022-11-21 10:58, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Andrew Tamis (andrew.tamis AT yale.edu) has submitted a material
> > > for
> > > > > a
> > > > > > review,
> > > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61793
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Deadline: 2022-12-05
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> >
> > Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> >
> > Research Scientist,
> > Department of Physics
> >
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> >
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