STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Andrew,

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

L6: "extract time information " -> please mention what time information. 
Do you mean "formation time of parton shower" ?
L12:"…  jet evolution .." -> the jet evolution
L14: "infrared and collinear " -> "infrared-and-collinear "
L21: "data from" -> "the data from";  "in p+p collisions"
L22: for the detector effect;
 "a Monte Carlo event generator " -> better to mention what are those 
generators or models?

Please give some information how do you select jet in pp and what 
kinematic range you plan to present.


Cheers
Nihar

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