STAR HardProbes PWG

[Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu>]

Hello Barbara and Nihar

Thank you for the comments!  I have implemented both of your suggestions.  I included split formation time as an example of time information that soft drop and the lund plane extract.  I have also listed PYTHIA 6 as the monte carlo generator I am using for comparisons.

Please let me know if you have any more comments

Best,

Andrew

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 6:07 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Andrew,

Please find my comment on your nice abstract.

L6: "extract time information " -> please mention what time information.
Do you mean "formation time of parton shower" ?
L12:"…  jet evolution .." -> the jet evolution
L14: "infrared and collinear " -> "infrared-and-collinear "
L21: "data from" -> "the data from";  "in p+p collisions"
L22: for the detector effect;
  "a Monte Carlo event generator " -> better to mention what are those
generators or models?

Please give some information how do you select jet in pp and what
kinematic range you plan to present.


Cheers
Nihar

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