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[Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu>]

Hi Sooraj,

Ok, i removed it. Thank you for the comments!

Best,

Andrew

On Wed, Nov 30, 2022 at 2:32 PM Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

   Thanks for the updated version. 

L27. Remove 'differently'. This should be a conclusion from the measurement, dont have to state ahead. 

With that addressed, I sign off  

thanks

Sooraj 

On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 11:05 PM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thank you for addressing my additional comment. I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-11-30 16:06, Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Sooraj,
>
> Thank you for the comments.
> L22: Done
> L23: I removed the kinematic range
> L25: Removed ", a monte carlo event generator"
> L27: I removed the kinematic range, and rephrased the last sentence to
> "..., which will provide information about how the quark-gluon plasma
> interacts with the jet differently across the angular scales covered
> by the EEC."  Please let me know if this sounds better.
>
> Best,
> Andrew
>
> On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 8:26 PM Sooraj Radhakrishnan
> <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hi Andrew,
>> Thanks for preparing this nice abstract. Please find a few
>> comments from me below
>>
>> L22: in p+p collisions --> p+p collisions
>> L23: GeV/c (not as a fraction). Do you want to specify the kinematic
>> range in the abstract?
>> L25: I dont think you need to define PYTHIA6 for HP abstract
>> L27: scale dependence of the QGP doesnt read right, what do you
>> refer to here? Modification from QGP at different length/angular
>> scales? Should rephrase if so
>>
>> thanks
>> Sooraj
>>
>> On Tue, Nov 29, 2022 at 12:00 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>
>>> Hello Andrew,
>>>
>>> Thank you for implementing my comments.
>>> I have a few additional comments below.
>>>
>>> L6: "Other time information" Not clear what is other time besides
>>> "split
>>> formation time" ?
>>> L23: "The response of the EEC to selections on jet pT …. 15
>>> GeV/c to 50
>>> GeV/c" ->" The EEC of full jet pT will be shown in a kinematic
>>> range
>>> from 15 to 50 GeV/$\it c$ using the STAR barrel calorimeter
>>> detectors
>>> and time projection chamber. "
>>> L25: "… PYTHIA 6, a Monte Carlo event generator." -> "…
>>> PYTHIA-6."  (If
>>> it is STAR tune, then mention it please)
>>>
>>> Cheers
>>> Nihar
>>>
>>> On 2022-11-29 01:14, Andrew Tamis wrote:
>>>> Hello Barbara and Nihar
>>>>
>>>> Thank you for the comments!  I have implemented both of your
>>>> suggestions.  I included split formation time as an example of
>>> time
>>>> information that soft drop and the lund plane extract.  I have
>>> also
>>>> listed PYTHIA 6 as the monte carlo generator I am using for
>>>> comparisons.
>>>>
>>>> Please let me know if you have any more comments
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>> Andrew
>>>>
>>>> On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 6:07 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
>>>> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hello Andrew,
>>>>>
>>>>> Please find my comment on your nice abstract.
>>>>>
>>>>> L6: "extract time information " -> please mention what time
>>>>> information.
>>>>> Do you mean "formation time of parton shower" ?
>>>>> L12:"…  jet evolution .." -> the jet evolution
>>>>> L14: "infrared and collinear " -> "infrared-and-collinear "
>>>>> L21: "data from" -> "the data from";  "in p+p collisions"
>>>>> L22: for the detector effect;
>>>>> "a Monte Carlo event generator " -> better to mention what are
>>>>> those
>>>>> generators or models?
>>>>>
>>>>> Please give some information how do you select jet in pp and
>>> what
>>>>> kinematic range you plan to present.
>>>>>
>>>>> Cheers
>>>>> Nihar
>>>>>
>>>>> On 2022-11-21 10:58, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
>>>>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Andrew Tamis (andrew.tamis AT yale.edu) has submitted a material
>>> for
>>>>> a
>>>>>> review,
>>>>>> please have a look:
>>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61793
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>> Sooraj Radhakrishnan
>>
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>> Department of Physics
>>
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Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44243

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
MS70R0319, One Cyclotron Road

Berkeley, CA 94720

Ph: 510-495-2473

Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov