STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Gabe,

Thank you for implementing my previous comments. It looks good now.
I have an additional comment below, with this implemented I sign off.

L10: "To explore this behavior at lower energy, …" -> "To explore this 
behavior at RHIC energy, …" or  "To explore this behavior at lower 
collision energy,… "


Cheers
Nihar



On 2022-11-29 01:12, Gabe Dale-Gau wrote:
> Nihar,
>
> Thanks for your comments on my abstract.
> I have implemented them and updated my submission here [4].
> I attempted to address your comment on motivation as well as
> techniques present in the study with a new sentence on lines 10-12.
> Let me know if you think this needs further modification and I will
> update again accordingly.
>
> Best,
> Gabe
>
> On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 4:31 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Gabe,
> >
> > Please find my comment on your nice abstract.
> >
> > Title: "Baryon to Meson Ratios in Jets, Au+Au Collisions at √sNN
> > =200GeV" -> " Measurements of Baryon-to-Meson Ratio in Jets  at
> > √sNN
> > =200GeV in Au+Au Collisions by STAR"  How about this?
> >
> > "baryon-to-meson" all places.
> >
> > L1: "Experimental measurements at RHIC and LHC …" -> "Measurements
> > at
> > RHIC and the LHC…"
> > L8-10: "Despite apparent…" and L10-12 "We present…" do not come
> > up
> > smoothly. Please try to add one sentence why compelling to study
> > "baryon-to-meson ratio in jets at RHIC " ? For example, to explore
> > the
> > behavior at lower energy, energy density, etc…
> >
> > Please include some information about your analysis like PID, jet
> > reco,
> > kinematic coverage etc to give insight to the abstract selection
> > committee.
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-11-21 04:14, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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> > >
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> > review,
> > > please
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