STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Yan,

Thank you for submitting this abstract.
Please find my comments on your nice abstract. With these implemented I 
sign off.

L4: "…several effects, including dissociation …" -> "…several effects, 
such as dissociation, regeneration in the QGP, and the cold nuclear 
matter effects."
L6: "Studying the properties …of the QGP via J/ψ requires a good 
understanding of all these effects." This sentence is not needed. Next 
sentence is Ok and convey the message.
L7: "…		on the size of collision system …" -> "…on the system size, 
hence varying the collisions system is…" (remove "very")
L10: "very high statistics…" - > "high statistics"
L12: "present precision …" -> present the precision …


Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-12-02 12:10, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Yan,
>
> The updated abstract looks good to me. I don't have any further
> comments on it. Thanks a lot.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
>
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> Department of Physics /
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> On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 2:38 PM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
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> > Hi Yi,
> >
> > Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have
> > a look:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf
> > best,
> > Yan
> >
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> > 发件人:"Yi Yang via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > 发送时间:2022-12-02 14:04:24 (星期五)
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> > 抄送:
> > 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Hard
> > Probes 2023 submitted for review
> >
> > Hi Yan,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for preparing this abstract. I only have one very minor
> > comment for your consideration.
> > - L10: around 4 billion minimum bias --> very high statistics
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> >
> > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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> > Department of Physics /
> > Director of Science Education Center
> > National Cheng Kung University
> > Tainan, 701 Taiwan
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> > Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
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> > HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf (bnl.gov) [2]
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