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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yan,

I sign off you nice abstract with a minor comment.

L10: In 2018. -> In 2018,

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 8:46 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Yan,

Thank you for submitting this abstract.
Please find my comments on your nice abstract. With these implemented I
sign off.

L4: "…several effects, including dissociation …" -> "…several effects,
such as dissociation, regeneration in the QGP, and the cold nuclear
matter effects."
L6: "Studying the properties …of the QGP via J/ψ requires a good
understanding of all these effects." This sentence is not needed. Next
sentence is Ok and convey the message.
L7: "…          on the size of collision system …" -> "…on the system size,
hence varying the collisions system is…" (remove "very")
L10: "very high statistics…" - > "high statistics"
L12: "present precision …" -> present the precision …


Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-12-02 12:10, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Yan,
>
> The updated abstract looks good to me. I don't have any further
> comments on it. Thanks a lot.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
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> On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 2:38 PM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l
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>> Hi Yi,
>>
>> Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have
>> a look:
>>
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf
>>
>> best,
>> Yan
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>> Hi Yan,
>>
>> Thanks a lot for preparing this abstract. I only have one very minor
>> comment for your consideration.
>> - L10: around 4 billion minimum bias --> very high statistics
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>>
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>> Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
>> review,
>> please have a look:
>> HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf (bnl.gov) [2]
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