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[wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for your nice comments, this is the new version, please have a look:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v4.pdf

best,
Yan

> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: "Nihar Sahoo" <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> 发送时间: 2022-12-02 15:45:56 (星期五)
> 收件人: "Yi Yang" <yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw>, "STAR HardProbes PWG" 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 抄送: wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Hard Probes 2023 
> submitted for review
> 
> Hello Yan,
> 
> Thank you for submitting this abstract.
> Please find my comments on your nice abstract. With these implemented I 
> sign off.
> 
> L4: "…several effects, including dissociation …" -> "…several effects, 
> such as dissociation, regeneration in the QGP, and the cold nuclear 
> matter effects."
> L6: "Studying the properties …of the QGP via J/ψ requires a good 
> understanding of all these effects." This sentence is not needed. Next 
> sentence is Ok and convey the message.
> L7: "…                on the size of collision system …" -> "…on the system 
> size, 
> hence varying the collisions system is…" (remove "very")
> L10: "very high statistics…" - > "high statistics"
> L12: "present precision …" -> present the precision …
> 
> 
> Cheers
> Nihar
> 
> On 2022-12-02 12:10, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > Hi Yan,
> > 
> > The updated abstract looks good to me. I don't have any further
> > comments on it. Thanks a lot.
> > 
> > Cheers,
> > Yi
> > 
> > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > Yi Yang, Associate Professor
> > Department of Physics /
> > Director of Science Education Center
> > National Cheng Kung University
> > Tainan, 701 Taiwan
> > E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw
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> >   [3]
> > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > 
> > On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 2:38 PM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > 
> >> Hi Yi,
> >> 
> >> Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please have
> >> a look:
> >> 
> >> 
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf
> >> 
> >> best,
> >> Yan
> >> 
> >> -----原始邮件-----
> >> 发件人:"Yi Yang via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> >> 发送时间:2022-12-02 14:04:24 (星期五)
> >> 收件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov, "STAR HardProbes PWG"
> >> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> >> 抄送:
> >> 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Hard
> >> Probes 2023 submitted for review
> >> 
> >> Hi Yan,
> >> 
> >> Thanks a lot for preparing this abstract. I only have one very minor
> >> comment for your consideration.
> >> - L10: around 4 billion minimum bias --> very high statistics
> >> 
> >> Cheers,
> >> Yi
> >> 
> >> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> >> Yi Yang, Associate Professor
> >> Department of Physics /
> >> Director of Science Education Center
> >> National Cheng Kung University
> >> Tainan, 701 Taiwan
> >> E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw
> >> Tel: +886-6-2757575 ext.65237
> >> Fax: +886-6-2747995
> >> Group Web: 
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://phys.ncku.edu.tw/*yiyang__;fg!!P4SdNyxKAPE!AKXpKjDHRnQwR42Y5vD965Xeq8Dy9oeVJlIzuk2PkbfhwfwOyW1etbyii-6HecYY5m_cfym92Sw-s6931YvSr1qmsTGBomeC$
> >>   [1]
> >> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> >> 
> >> On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 2:00 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> >> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >> 
> >> Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> >> review,
> >> please have a look:
> >> HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf (bnl.gov) [2]
> >> 
> >> Deadline: 2022-12-05
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