STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Yan,

Please correct this one in the abstract.

from Barbara's comment.

> L10: In 2018. -> In 2018,

Cheers
Nihar

On 2022-12-02 13:25, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Yan,
>
> I sign off you nice abstract with a minor comment.
> L10: In 2018. -> In 2018,
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 8:46 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hello Yan,
> >
> > Thank you for submitting this abstract.
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract. With these
> > implemented I
> > sign off.
> >
> > L4: "…several effects, including dissociation …" -> "…several
> > effects,
> > such as dissociation, regeneration in the QGP, and the cold nuclear
> > matter effects."
> > L6: "Studying the properties …of the QGP via J/ψ requires a good
> > understanding of all these effects." This sentence is not needed.
> > Next
> > sentence is Ok and convey the message.
> > L7: "…          on the size of collision system …" -> "…on the
> > system size,
> > hence varying the collisions system is…" (remove "very")
> > L10: "very high statistics…" - > "high statistics"
> > L12: "present precision …" -> present the precision …
> >
> > Cheers
> > Nihar
> >
> > On 2022-12-02 12:10, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Hi Yan,
> > >
> > > The updated abstract looks good to me. I don't have any further
> > > comments on it. Thanks a lot.
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Yi
> > >
> > > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > > Yi Yang, Associate Professor
> > > Department of Physics /
> > > Director of Science Education Center
> > > National Cheng Kung University
> > > Tainan, 701 Taiwan
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> > >
> > > On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 2:38 PM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l
> > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Hi Yi,
> > > >
> > > > Thanks for your nice comments. This is the new version, please
> > have
> > > > a look:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf
> > > > best,
> > > > Yan
> > > >
> > > > -----原始邮件-----
> > > > 发件人:"Yi Yang via Star-hp-l" <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > > 发送时间:2022-12-02 14:04:24 (星期五)
> > > > 收件人: webmaster AT star.bnl.gov, "STAR HardProbes PWG"
> > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > > > 抄送:
> > > > 主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Hard
> > > > Probes 2023 submitted for review
> > > >
> > > > Hi Yan,
> > > >
> > > > Thanks a lot for preparing this abstract. I only have one very
> > minor
> > > > comment for your consideration.
> > > > - L10: around 4 billion minimum bias --> very high statistics
> > > >
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > Yi
> > > >
> > > > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > > > Yi Yang, Associate Professor
> > > > Department of Physics /
> > > > Director of Science Education Center
> > > > National Cheng Kung University
> > > > Tainan, 701 Taiwan
> > > > E-Mail: yiyang AT ncku.edu.tw
> > > > Tel: +886-6-2757575 ext.65237
> > > > Fax: +886-6-2747995
> > > > Group Web: http://phys.ncku.edu.tw/~yiyang [1] [1]
> > > > +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > > >
> > > > On Fri, Dec 2, 2022 at 2:00 PM webmaster--- via Star-hp-l
> > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > >
> > > > Yan Wang (wy157543 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material for
> > a
> > > > review,
> > > > please have a look:
> > > > HP_abstract_Jpsi_in_isobar_v3.pdf (bnl.gov [2]) [2]
> > > >
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