STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Diptanil,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

called ‘jet quenching’  -> called jet quenching.  (In academic writing 
italic would not be appropriate)
Same for "Jet fragmentation function "
"jets of radius R = 0.4 " -> "jets with radium of 0.4"

With these implemented, I sign off.

Cheers
Nihar



On 2023-03-07 11:17, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Neil,
>
> Thanks a lot for the nice abstract. I only have some minor comments
> for your consideration.
>  - L1: heavy ion -> heavy-ion
>  - L9: quenching -> jet quenching
>  - L10: LHC -> the LHC
>  - L16: I would remove "of radius R = 0.4" since I don't think it is
> that important in the abstract, but it is up to you.
>
> Cheers,
> Yi
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