STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac,

Please find a few comments on your nice poster.

Abstract:
"In this talk, we present…" -> "We present …"
"We also present…" -> "Finally, we discuss ongoing work …"

Motivation:
"Density" -> "Energy density …"


Cheers
Nihar




On 2023-03-22 20:08, Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I’ve posted a draft of the poster. I sincerely apologize for the delay
> in getting this to the list. I will make every effort to make sure it
> doesn’t happen again.
> Note on the final two plots: the 2D histogram is on the full (Ru)
> dataset; the v2 plot is the result of a suggestion from the FCV PWG to
> demonstrate that q2 has some sensitivity to anisotropy, and I will
> increase the statistics used, probably with the next draft I send out.
> As this is v2-obs and not the v2 corrected for event plane resolution,
> it is not a “physics" plot.
> For both plots I know there are labels that need to be added, and
> beautification to be done, but I will also take care of that in the
> next iteration.
>
> Thanks for your consideration,
> Isaac
>
> > On Mar 22, 2023, at 10:29 AM, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l 
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