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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Hi Neil, Yuan,

Thanks for the updated version.

Please find my remaining comments. 

- L1: Heavy flavor partons -> Heavy flavor quarks 

- L11:  insight to ->  insight into

- L15: We report -> We present

- L17: at √sNN = 200 GeV -> at √sNN = 200 GeV and to theoretical model predictions. 

- L18: We also report measurements -> D0 meson studies are complemented with measurements

- L18: D0 (c¯u) -> D0 

- L19: you can remove ", collected by the STAR experiment at RHIC" - it should be clear at this point these are STAR measurements reported. 

- L19-22: We show the transverse momentum dependent invariant yields of the D0 jets and the first measurement of the ‘z’ for D0 mesons in the jets. We also measure the nuclear modification factors as functions of the jet transverse momentum and ‘z ->  We show the transverse momentum dependent invariant yields, the first measurement of the $z$ distribution, and the nuclear modification factors as a function of p_T and $z$ for D0 meson jets. 

- L22: we measure -> we report

- L23: Such measurements -> Reported measurements

Cheers,

Barbara

On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 7:13 PM Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Barbara and Nihar, thank you for your comments. I have made the changes in this version here(https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_Diptanil_Yuan_CharmMesons_v2.pdf).

Thank you.

On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 3:18 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Diptanil and Yuan,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.

Title: "Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets at STAR" ->
"Measurement of charm meson production and charm meson tagged jets in
heavy-ion collisions at STAR"

L2: "…excellent probes of the properties …" -> "…excellent probes to
study the properties .."
L4:Jets tagged -> In addition,  jets tagged
L14:GeV, collected ->           GeV that collected
L16:in the jets -> in jets
L17-18:"…the transverse momentum and the transverse momentum fraction.
-> "…the jet transverse momentum and the transverse momentum fraction of
jet".
Somewhere inside the second para, please mention the pT range of D^0 you
plan to present.

Cheers
Nihar


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