STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Diptanil,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments on it. 

(I just realized I missed your poster's abstract, will provide it in a minute.) 

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 11:32 PM Diptanil Roy <roydiptanil AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Yi, thank you for your comments. The word count in Latex is 319, but the overall count seems to be 308 in the new version that I uploaded. That can be found here (https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_Diptanil_Yuan_CharmMesons_v4.pdf).

Please let me know if you have any further comments/questions.

Regards

On Sat, Apr 22, 2023 at 6:53 PM Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Diptanil and Yuan, 

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I have some minor comments for your consideration: 

 - General: I used WORD to calculate the number of words and found it is "302". Could you please check? 

 - L3: cross-section --> cross section 

 - L7: transverse momentum --> transverse momentum (p_T)

 - L14: at the STAR experiment --> with the STAR experiment 

 - L15: transverse momentum  --> p_T 

 - L19: transverse momentum  --> p_T 

 - L21: p_T should be in the same style as before.

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Apr 23, 2023 at 2:15 AM Diptanil Roy via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Barbara and Nihar, thank you for your comments. I have implemented all of them here (https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_Diptanil_Yuan_CharmMesons_v3.pdf).

Please let me know if you have any further comments. Thank you.

On Sat, Apr 22, 2023 at 9:11 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Diptanil and Yuan,

Thank you for addressing my comments.
I see one untouched and some additional comments.

>> Title: "Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets at STAR" ->
>> "Measurement of charm meson production and charm meson tagged jets in
>> heavy-ion collisions at STAR"
L1: (charm (c) and bottom (b)), -> better to avoid this style
parenthesis usage
L7: (z = pT,hadron/pT,jet) -> ($z$ = $p_{\rm T,hadron}$/$p_{\rm T,jet})
L12: "Such modifications have been observed at the LHC for inclusive
jets." Drop this sentence; not adding anything but it devalues the
STAR's attempt as standalone.
L13: We report the first -> In addition, we report the first
L18: D^0(cu ̄) -> D^0
L19: 200 GeV, collected by the STAR experiment at RHIC. -> "200 GeV."
Drop rest, not needed
L20: ‘z’-> $z$ [with no ' '] and elsewhere

Cheers
Nihar




On 2023-04-21 22:42, Diptanil Roy wrote:
> Hi Barbara and Nihar, thank you for your comments. I have made the
> changes in this version
> here(https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_Diptanil_Yuan_CharmMesons_v2.pdf).
>
> Thank you.
>
> On Thu, Apr 20, 2023 at 3:18 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hello Diptanil and Yuan,
>>
>> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
>>
>> Title: "Charm Mesons and Charm Meson Tagged Jets at STAR" ->
>> "Measurement of charm meson production and charm meson tagged jets
>> in
>> heavy-ion collisions at STAR"
>>
>> L2: "…excellent probes of the properties …" -> "…excellent
>> probes to
>> study the properties .."
>> L4:Jets tagged -> In addition,  jets tagged
>> L14:GeV, collected ->           GeV that collected
>> L16:in the jets -> in jets
>> L17-18:"…the transverse momentum and the transverse momentum
>> fraction.
>> -> "…the jet transverse momentum and the transverse momentum
>> fraction of
>> jet".
>> Somewhere inside the second para, please mention the pT range of D^0
>> you
>> plan to present.
>>
>> Cheers
>> Nihar
>>
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