STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Youqi,

It looks like you addressed my comments from today’s institutional practice, 
so I only have a few remaining ones. With these implemented, I sign off.

Enjoy Berkeley!
-Isaac

5. If you plan to say it verbally, then no need to add it as text, but it 
should be explained that a trivial weaker zcut is justified because the UE 
contribution to jets in pp is small.

9. I still think "MultiFold result" and "RooUnfold result" are strange 
constructions. These are physics results, not results on the correction 
method. So “RooUnfolded/MultiFolded result” would be fine, similar to what 
you have at the bottom of the slide.

15. If you don’t get the Herwig before the talk, don’t forget to remove it 
from the plot.

16. “fluctuation”; “neutral energy measurement for jet p_T below 20 GeV”; 
This “(smaller effect)” is also probably a distraction from the discussion 
you want to have and could be removed. I’ll leave it up to you.


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