STAR HardProbes PWG

[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Youqi,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster. I only have some minor comments for your consideration. 

 - General: 

     - I think the font size is too small in several sections.  

     - Some of them are very wordy, like Grooming section. Is it possible to itemize them and make the font bigger? 

 - Unfolding Correlated Variables 

    - the quality of "Q^k" and "M" is not good, and they look different than others. 

 - Charge Correlator Ratio: 

    - I would emphasize this result since this is new in QM. Make these two sections larger. 

 - Outlook: should be larger...

Cheers,

Yi

 

     

 

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