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[Yi Yang <yiyang0429 AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yan,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I only have some very minor comments for your consideration. 

 - p2: dissociation --> Dissociation

 - p4: An extra space in front of "10-20 times"?

 - p10: pol --> polynomial function  (since you have space)

 - p12: Remove the legend for "PHENIX pp, xxx" 

 - p13: Remove the legend for "PHENIX pp, xxx"

 - p13: "Centrality dependence trend seems be similar to that at SPS than at LHC" --> "Centrality dependence trend seems be more similar to that at SPS than at LHC"

 - p21: statistic --> statistics 

 

Cheers,

Yi

On Sun, Sep 3, 2023 at 9:19 PM wy157543--- via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi all，

Thank you for your nice comments, The new version can be found at

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64965

best,

Yan

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主题: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Yan Wang for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

Dear Yan

I copied a comment from the google doc for your presentation 

on J/psi RAA energy dependence including SPS and LHC shown 

in the rehearsal today. 

Best regards, ShinIchi

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM_2023_v7_1.pdf

S7: Legend missing for 62GeV

Why is it red for 54GeV? (add “preliminary”)

      17.3, 200, 5020 -> 17.3, 2760, 5020 GeV for Pb+Pb

2023/08/31 12:32、Barbara Trzeciak via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>のメール:

Hi Yan,

very nice slides.

I propose to use a log scale for the x-axis on the right plot on slide 5 - energy dependence of J/psi RAA vs Npart.

It should be easier to distinguish low Npart points, as for the colliding system scan on slide 8.

I also suggest to highlight in some color bullet points with important physics messages, that we want to highlight. 

Cheers,

Barbara

On Wed, Aug 30, 2023 at 9:21 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Yan,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some comments on v3 for your consideration. 

 - General: I would replace all "isobar" or "isobaric" to "Zr+Zr & Ru+Ru". 

 - p4: I remember we used 4B isobar data before, right?  

 - p7: Please indicate BHT2 is the new result for QM

 - p11: I don't think that we can say "Centrality dependence trend seems be closer to that at SPS than at LHC" with current statistics. Should we just say "They have similar centrality dependence"? 

 - p12: Second bullet, can you calculate the significance? It looks like a 2-3 sigma effect... 

 - p13: It would be good to show the Upsilon mass spectra from isobar data here. 

 - p14 -15: I would move J/psi polarization before the Upsilon results. I understand you want to separate them by physics topic, so it is up to you. 

 - p16: The ordering should be the same in your presentation, first talk about the J/psi in BES-II, then results from isobar. 

 - p17: run23-25 --> run 23-25

Cheers,

Yi

 

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