STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Qian,

Please find my comments on your abstract.


Title: You can shorten a bit.
"Measurements of J/ψ polarization and global spin alignment in Ru+Ru and 
Zr+Zr collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV from STAR experiment" -> 
"Measurements of J/ψ polarization and global spin alignment in isobar 
collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV by STAR"

"J/psi" has been used many instances in this abstract. Please avoid.

L9: "…suppression of J/ψ and zero J/ψ v2 …" -> suppression of J/ψ and 
its zero second order flow coefficient ...

L12: "Beside J/ψ nulcear modification factor and J/ψ azimuthal 
anisotropy observable, the J/ψ polarization…" -> "Besides, the J/ψ 
polarization could provide additional information about the QGP 
properties and its production mechanism in heavy-ion collisions.
 [No need to repeat again, already mentioned in previous sentence; and 
"a new degree of study" doesn't sound good]

L14-18: "it has been hypothesized…in early stage. -> This entire 
sentence sounds complicated. Can you please split it?
Suggestion:
_ hypothesized -> predicted
_ J/ψ can be polarized by… -> in the spin alignment context better to 
say "J/ψ spin aligns in the direction of global angular momentum due to 
spin-orbital coupling"
Better avoid mixing "J/psi polarization" and "J/psi spin alignment" in 
the text.

L22: will be present -> are reported



Best
Nihar

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