STAR HardProbes PWG

[tc88qy <tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Nihar,
  Thanks for your carefully reading and suggestions.
 I keep "Ru +Ru and Zr+Zr" in the title. It would be more friendly to 
those people not from STAR experiment to know the collision system 
directly.
 Other than that I have implemented all your suggestions in the new 
version (v2).

Thanks
Qian Yang

On 2023-09-27 14:42, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hello Qian,
>
> Please find my comments on your abstract.
>
>
> Title: You can shorten a bit.
> "Measurements of J/ψ polarization and global spin alignment in Ru+Ru
> and Zr+Zr collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV from STAR experiment" ->
> "Measurements of J/ψ polarization and global spin alignment in isobar
> collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV by STAR"
>
> "J/psi" has been used many instances in this abstract. Please avoid.
>
> L9: "…suppression of J/ψ and zero J/ψ v2 …" -> suppression of J/ψ and
> its zero second order flow coefficient ...
>
> L12: "Beside J/ψ nulcear modification factor and J/ψ azimuthal
> anisotropy observable, the J/ψ polarization…" -> "Besides, the J/ψ
> polarization could provide additional information about the QGP
> properties and its production mechanism in heavy-ion collisions.
>  [No need to repeat again, already mentioned in previous sentence; and
> "a new degree of study" doesn't sound good]
>
> L14-18: "it has been hypothesized…in early stage. -> This entire
> sentence sounds complicated. Can you please split it?
> Suggestion:
> _ hypothesized -> predicted
> _ J/ψ can be polarized by… -> in the spin alignment context better to
> say "J/ψ spin aligns in the direction of global angular momentum due
> to spin-orbital coupling"
> Better avoid mixing "J/psi polarization" and "J/psi spin alignment" in 
> the text.
>
> L22: will be present -> are reported
>
>
>
> Best
> Nihar
>
> On 2023-09-27 09:01, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
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> > Qian Yang (tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a 
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