STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Sevil,

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Best
Nihar


On 2024-02-08 12:13, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Dear Sevil,
>
> Please find my comments below on your nice presentation slides.
>
> _Slide numbers are random or not inserted properly.  Please correct the 
> order.
> _ Footer, you can add your name
>
>
> Slide3: Jets with STAR
> _ precision measurements of particles containing heavy quarks. ->
> precision measurements of heavy flavor hadron with short decay length.
> _ clustering of energy deposits using EMCAL  -> I think, for full jet
> measurement, we do not use any clustering of BEMC towers. Is not it?
> Probably need clarification.
> _ the precise momentum of charged tracks measured by inner detectors.
> -> extended kinematic coverage (in eta and pT) of charged tacks using
> inner TPC. (Please mention also pT < 0.15 GeV/c and |eta| < 1.5
> somewhere)
>
>
> Slide5:  "To what extent can the identities of underlying partons be
> deduced from properties of the jets they produce?" -> Would it be ok
> just to say like "How well can we tell what kind of quarks or gluons
> are inside the jets and corresponding jet properties?"
> Or something like this
>
> SLide6: Generalized Angularity
> _a measurement of how spread out or concentrated the energy is  ->
> Please include "in terms of angle" like "distribution of energy in
> side jet as a function of angular scale"
> _ "properties of jet " -> it would be better to mention what are those
> properties of jet like q/g jet fragmentation, energy distribution,
> etc.
> _ Probably, in this slide, you need to mention/define what is z_i^k
> for upper right expression ?
> _ Lower left figure, what is "LHA"?
>
> Slide8 :Jet Shapes @ RHIC:
> _ Figure needs description of these colored regions. Legend is missing 
> here.
> _Above 2 GeV/c, results are consistent with each other -> As legend is
> missing, so difficult to see.
> _ Less steep than @ LHC energies -> To support this statement, please
> include LHC plot. Either side-by-side or another slide
>
> Slide9: Event Selection:
> This slide seems popped abruptly. Could you please either say
> something before to come to this slide? Motive.
>
> Slide11: Ex: Performance of Multi-Fold
> Plot needs x-axis title and label.
> Or, You could just use this plot in slide10:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Tanmay_Pani_QM2023_v5.pdf
>
>
> Slide:Heavy Flavor Dependence
>
> _ Heavy flavor tagged jets can be selected on displaced vertices ->
> Heavy flavor tagged jets can be selected on secondary vertices
>
>
> Best
> Nihar
>
>
> On 2024-02-03 00:23, Sevil Salur via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > Dear All
> > Please find the 1st draft of my WWND talk in:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/wwnd24_salur.pdf
> > Let me know if you have any comments or suggestions,
> > Best
> > Sevil
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