STAR HardProbes PWG

[<Ondrej.Lomicky AT seznam.cz>]

Hi Nihar and Isaac,

Thank you for your suggestions and comments, please find the new version of the abstract https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstractSQM2024_v2.pdf

Best regards,
Ondrej

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Od: Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Datum: 8. 2. 2024 22:54:15
Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for SQM-2024
 submitted for review
> Hi Ondrej,
>
> In addition to Nihar’s comments, I have a couple of comments on motivating the studies you mention in the third paragraph:
>
> Nuclear modification factors and radial profiles are mentioned there for the first time. They should be mentioned somewhere in the previous paragraph, and given proper motivation.
>
> The first paragraph should make some reference to heavy quarks, since the D0 meson tagging mentioned in the third paragraph isn’t currently explicitly motivated.
>
> Thanks,
> Isaac
>
> > On Feb 7, 2024, at 5:05 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Hello Ondrej,
> >
> > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> > I suggest you to include line numbers in the next version.
> >
> > 1) The properties of these jets, including their structure or energy loss, are modified ... -> The jet yield, shape, and its sub-structure get modified...
> >
> > 2) medium, in contrast to their propagation through a vacuum. -> medium compared with its vacuum propagation.
> >
> > 3) This effect is called jet quenching. -> This phenomenon is known as jet quenching.
> >
> > 4) 2nd Para: "The transverse momentum... to various jet aspects." -> Break this long sentence.
> >
> > 5) Better to define all the symbols in the _expression_. Or just use the words like "generalized angularities", "jet fragmentation", etc.
> >
> > Best
> > Nihar
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 2024-02-02 19:04, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> >> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >> Ondrej Lomicky (lomicond AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material for a review,
> >> please have a look:
> >> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66707
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