STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Ondrej,

Thank you for addressing my comments, I sign off.

Best
Nihar


On 2024-02-14 21:21, Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l wrote:
> Hi Ondrej,
>
> I’m sorry I missed your email — I sign off.
>
> Thanks,
> Isaac
>
> > On Feb 9, 2024, at 6:14 AM, Ondrej Lomicky via Star-hp-l
> > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > Hi Nihar and Isaac,
> >
> > Thank you for your suggestions and comments, please find the new
> > version of the abstract
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstractSQM2024_v2.pdf
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Ondrej
> >
> > ---------- Původní e-mail ----------
> > Od: Mooney, Isaac via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Komu: STAR HardProbes PWG <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Kopie: Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
> > <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>
> > Datum: 8. 2. 2024 22:54:15
> > Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for
> > SQM-2024 submitted for review
> >
> > > Hi Ondrej,
> > >
> > > In addition to Nihar’s comments, I have a couple of comments on
> > > motivating the studies you mention in the third paragraph:
> > >
> > > Nuclear modification factors and radial profiles are mentioned
> > > there for the first time. They should be mentioned somewhere in
> > > the previous paragraph, and given proper motivation.
> > >
> > > The first paragraph should make some reference to heavy quarks,
> > > since the D0 meson tagging mentioned in the third paragraph
> > > isn’t currently explicitly motivated.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > Isaac
> > >
> > > > On Feb 7, 2024, at 5:05 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > > Hello Ondrej,
> > > >
> > > > Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> > > > I suggest you to include line numbers in the next version.
> > > >
> > > > 1) The properties of these jets, including their structure or
> > > energy loss, are modified ... -> The jet yield, shape, and its
> > > sub-structure get modified...
> > > > 2) medium, in contrast to their propagation through a vacuum. ->
> > > medium compared with its vacuum propagation.
> > > > 3) This effect is called jet quenching. -> This phenomenon is
> > > known as jet quenching.
> > > > 4) 2nd Para: "The transverse momentum... to various jet
> > > aspects." -> Break this long sentence.
> > > > 5) Better to define all the symbols in the expression. Or just
> > > use the words like "generalized angularities", "jet
> > > fragmentation", etc.
> > > > Best
> > > > Nihar
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On 2024-02-02 19:04, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > Ondrej Lomicky (lomicond AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
> > > for a review,
> > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66707
> > > > > Deadline: 2024-02-17
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