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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Ondrej,

I’m sorry I missed your email — I sign off.

Thanks,

Isaac

On Feb 9, 2024, at 6:14 AM, Ondrej Lomicky via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Nihar and Isaac,

Thank you for your suggestions and comments, please find the new version of the abstract https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/abstractSQM2024_v2.pdf

Best regards,
Ondrej

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Předmět: Re: [Star-hp-l] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for SQM-2024 submitted for review

Hi Ondrej, 

In addition to Nihar’s comments, I have a couple of comments on motivating the studies you mention in the third paragraph: 

Nuclear modification factors and radial profiles are mentioned there for the first time. They should be mentioned somewhere in the previous paragraph, and given proper motivation. 

The first paragraph should make some reference to heavy quarks, since the D0 meson tagging mentioned in the third paragraph isn’t currently explicitly motivated. 

Thanks, 
Isaac 

> On Feb 7, 2024, at 5:05 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote: 
> 
> Hello Ondrej, 
> 
> Please find my comments on your nice abstract. 
> I suggest you to include line numbers in the next version. 
> 
> 1) The properties of these jets, including their structure or energy loss, are modified ... -> The jet yield, shape, and its sub-structure get modified... 
> 
> 2) medium, in contrast to their propagation through a vacuum. -> medium compared with its vacuum propagation. 
> 
> 3) This effect is called jet quenching. -> This phenomenon is known as jet quenching. 
> 
> 4) 2nd Para: "The transverse momentum... to various jet aspects." -> Break this long sentence. 
> 
> 5) Better to define all the symbols in the _expression_. Or just use the words like "generalized angularities", "jet fragmentation", etc. 
> 
> Best 
> Nihar 
> 
> 
> 
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