STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Ondrej,

Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
I suggest you to include line numbers in the next version.

1) The properties of these jets, including their structure or energy 
loss, are modified ... -> The jet yield, shape, and its sub-structure 
get modified...

2) medium, in contrast to their propagation through a vacuum. -> medium 
compared with its vacuum propagation.

3) This effect is called jet quenching. -> This phenomenon is known as 
jet quenching.

4) 2nd Para: "The transverse momentum... to various jet aspects." -> 
Break this long sentence.

5) Better to define all the symbols in the expression. Or just use the 
words like "generalized angularities", "jet fragmentation", etc.

Best
Nihar







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