STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Ondrej,

In addition to Nihar’s comments, I have a couple of comments on motivating 
the studies you mention in the third paragraph:

Nuclear modification factors and radial profiles are mentioned there for the 
first time. They should be mentioned somewhere in the previous paragraph, and 
given proper motivation.

The first paragraph should make some reference to heavy quarks, since the D0 
meson tagging mentioned in the third paragraph isn’t currently explicitly 
motivated.

Thanks,
Isaac

> On Feb 7, 2024, at 5:05 AM, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l 
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> Hello Ondrej,
>
> Please find my comments on your nice abstract.
> I suggest you to include line numbers in the next version.
>
> 1) The properties of these jets, including their structure or energy loss, 
> are modified ... -> The jet yield, shape, and its sub-structure get 
> modified...
>
> 2) medium, in contrast to their propagation through a vacuum. -> medium 
> compared with its vacuum propagation.
>
> 3) This effect is called jet quenching. -> This phenomenon is known as jet 
> quenching.
>
> 4) 2nd Para: "The transverse momentum... to various jet aspects." -> Break 
> this long sentence.
>
> 5) Better to define all the symbols in the expression. Or just use the 
> words like "generalized angularities", "jet fragmentation", etc.
>
> Best
> Nihar
>
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