STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Andrew,

Here are a few more small comments along with a replication of the comments I just gave you offline in your office so there is a record.

Thanks,

Isaac

Sentence 1: You did a great job making the abstract general to the N-point correlator for any N, but we discussed here removing “projected” and moving it to the first sentence of paragraph 2 because this sentence is valid for projected or non-projected correlators whereas you measure specifically the projected one.

Sentence 2: “approximately separates”

Sentence 3: “at which hadron groups with different charge compositions” or similar

Paragraph 2, sentence 1: “We will present”

Sentence 3: “at RHIC energies compared to LHC energies”

: Please revise to make “close to the massive case” and “observation of the non-perturbative effects of …” more clear especially for a reader not familiar with EECs.

Last sentence: “are presented”.

On May 13, 2024, at 02:14, Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot. I don't have any further comments.

Cheers,

Yi

On Thu, May 9, 2024 at 11:32 PM Andrew Tamis via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Yi,

Thank you very much for the suggestion, i have implimented it.

Best,

Andrew

On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 10:03 PM Yi Yang via Star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

Thanks a lot for the well-written abstract. 

I only have one minor suggestion for your consideration. 

  - at STAR sqrt(s) --> at STAR collision energies 

 

Cheers,

Yi

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