STAR HardProbes PWG

["Yi Yang" <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>]

Hi Neil,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. It looks good to me.

Cheers,

Yi

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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
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From:Diptanil Roy<roydiptanil AT gmail.com>
To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2024 04:13:23
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Diptanil Roy for HP2024 submitted for review

Hi Nihar, Yi,

Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I have implemented all of your suggestions, and cut some slides. Overall, the general slide count is high because of animations.

Please find some responses below:

Slide7,8: These slides come abruptly, can you try to make a story to combining both jet angularity and D^0+jet in one slide

I prefer the flow of the current slides where I mention possible changes in jets yield and their substructure in HIC and then talk about the reasons that these effects might potentially be different for heavy flavor jets - As a way to motivate looking at HF jets. I don't spend more than half a minute on this slide.

 Slide24: This slide is not clear. Please mention what point you want to make here.

Agreed. I was just gonna verbally mention this - but what I am alluding to is the difference in behavior at different kinematic ranges. It could just be that - different kinematic ranges with different sensitivities, but could be more as well. This is an open question and our measurement is an additional data point in the discussion. 

 - p12: Are you using HT trigger? If so, please add triggering in the BEMC part.

There is no HT trigger used for this analysis. 

 p24, 25: I would add clear labels to indicate the kinematic ranges for the three results.

Yep, that's a great suggestion. Implemented.

The new version is available here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Diptanil_HardProbes_2024_v1.pdf

Thank you. 

On Tue, Sep 17, 2024 at 7:26 PM Yi Yang <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw> wrote:

Hi Neil,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I only have some minor comments for your consideration.
 - General: please make sure that you can finish it in time since you have many slides.
 - General: you have ~1/2 are for introduction, is it a bit too much (but it summarizes very well)?
 - p12: Are you using HT trigger? If so, please add triggering in the BEMC part.
 - p14: Add "%" in [0-10], [10-40], [40-80]
 - p24, 25: I would add clear labels to indicate the kinematic ranges for the three results.

Cheers,
Yi


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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
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Date:Wed, 11 Sep 2024 01:32:31
Subject:[[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Diptanil Roy for HP2024 submitted for review

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Diptanil Roy (roydiptanil AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a review, 
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