STAR HardProbes PWG

["Yi Yang" <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>]

Dear Jeongmyung,

Thanks a lot for the nice poster, and sorry for missing this before. 
I only have two minor comments for your consideration. 
 - Abstract: I would remove ", however, ".
 - Could you please remind me that if the PYTHIA simulation passed the GEANT 
simulation? If so, it would be great to mention it and have a short 
introduction for STAR. Otherwise, I think the only connection to STAR is in 
the "title", "flow chart", "collision energy", and "future plan". And this 
study actually can be a more generic one. 

Cheers,
Yi


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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
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E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw 
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-----Original message-----
From:jeongmyung <jeongmyung AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
To:star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
Cc:Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
Date:Mon, 16 Sep 2024 18:04:25
Subject:Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Jeongmyung Kang for HP2024 
submitted for review

Dear Nihar,

Hello, thank you for the comments.
I applied most of your comments in the new version. Please find my new 
version (Jeongmyung_2024_HP_poster_v2.pdf)

Also, I keep thinking about your comment regarding 'Flow chart'.

   >_Flow chart: -> The  need of this flow chart is not clear at this 
stage. I think you can make a flow chart of your analysis procedure.

One of the main purposes of this poster is to show the status of the 
on-going analysis, and at this stage, I believe it is better to keep the 
current flow chart.


Thank you,
Jeongmyung

2024-09-15 16:12에 Nihar Sahoo이(가) 쓴 내용:
> Hello Jeongmyung,
> 
> Please find my comments on your nice poster.
> 
> 
> Introduction:
> 
> _Particularly dominant contribution in low pT,jet region -> you need
> to mention what Pt,jet range you are indicating.  Low pT,jet < 5 GeV/c
> is that you mean.
> _Challenges in central heavy-ion collisions -> Challenges in heavy-ion
> collisions
> _ E.g. -> e. g.
> _pT spectra down to very low pT,jet -> Please mention what is that
> "very low pT" ?
> _pT,trigger -> need to define
> 
> _Searching parton virtuality evolution in central heavy- ion
> collisions -> Studying parton virtuality evolution in central heavy-
> ion collisions
> _ virtuality evolution -> it would be better to mention what is
> "virtuality evolution"?
> _ Please mention Why do we need to study virtuality evolution in
> heavy-ion collisions?
> 
> 
> Analysis Details:
> _Flow chart: -> The  need of this flow chart is not clear at this
> stage. I think you can make a flow chart of your analysis procedure.
> 
> _"Data set" -> As you are not using any data, so you just mention
> "Simulated events"
> _200 GeV pp collisions -> You need to mention what type of event
> sample you have generated. Is it non-trigger (no-Bias) or triggered
> events for this study ( like high pT hadron, gamma, pi0 trigger
> events)
> _"Thermal background" -> Need to explain what is thermal background?
> 
> Results:
> 
> _ You need to mention what are SE and ME ?
> _ In response matrices, you have not mentioned, what effect you have
> implanted to create this response matrix? Like detector effects,
> and/or heavy-ion background fluctuations effect.
> _ Corrected recoil jet yield spectra -> You need to mention what
> correction you are implementing (see above comment).
> 
> In conclusion:
> You need to mention also outlook of this study.
> 
> 
> Best
> Nihar
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> On 2024-09-14 09:59, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
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