STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Jeongmyung,

Please find my comments on your nice poster.


Introduction:

_Particularly dominant contribution in low pT,jet region -> you need to 
mention what Pt,jet range you are indicating.  Low pT,jet < 5 GeV/c is 
that you mean.
_Challenges in central heavy-ion collisions -> Challenges in heavy-ion 
collisions
_ E.g. -> e. g.
_pT spectra down to very low pT,jet -> Please mention what is that "very 
low pT" ?
_pT,trigger -> need to define

_Searching parton virtuality evolution in central heavy- ion collisions 
-> Studying parton virtuality evolution in central heavy- ion collisions
_ virtuality evolution -> it would be better to mention what is 
"virtuality evolution"?
_ Please mention Why do we need to study virtuality evolution in 
heavy-ion collisions?


Analysis Details:
_Flow chart: -> The  need of this flow chart is not clear at this stage. 
I think you can make a flow chart of your analysis procedure.

_"Data set" -> As you are not using any data, so you just mention 
"Simulated events"
_200 GeV pp collisions -> You need to mention what type of event sample 
you have generated. Is it non-trigger (no-Bias) or triggered events for 
this study ( like high pT hadron, gamma, pi0 trigger events)
_"Thermal background" -> Need to explain what is thermal background?

Results:

_ You need to mention what are SE and ME ?
_ In response matrices, you have not mentioned, what effect you have 
implanted to create this response matrix? Like detector effects, and/or 
heavy-ion background fluctuations effect.
_ Corrected recoil jet yield spectra -> You need to mention what 
correction you are implementing (see above comment).

In conclusion:
You need to mention also outlook of this study.


Best
Nihar







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