STAR HardProbes PWG

["Yi Yang" <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>]

Hi Gabe,

Thanks a lot for taking my suggestions into account and the updated version. I have two minor comment/suggestion for your consideration.

- Title page: there is an "official" DOE logo for the talk, you can take a look at others. (Need to add "Supported in part by")

- p21: I would suggest to make the plots smaller and bullets larger in the summary page, but it is completely up to you.

Cheers,

Yi

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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica 
E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw 
Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
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From:Gabe Dale-Gau<gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>
To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Date:  Thu, 19 Sep 2024 01:18:32
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Gabriel Dale-Gau for HP2024 submitted for review

Hi Yi,

Thank you for your comments on my presentation.

I have implemented all suggested changes in v2 of my slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HardProbes2024_BaryonToMesonInJet_v2.pdf

Please find detailed responses below.

Sincerely,

Gabe

 - p1: Please add the DOE logo.

 

Done

 - p9: Right plot, in the legend, the style looks the same for Proton and Kaon 

 

Fixed.

 - p10: Should it call "Problem"? Or "Challenge"?

 

I like this update. Changed to “The Challenge”. When I first wrote these slides I was thinking of “Problem” as in “math problem” or “problem set”, but I see now that the word could be read as carrying a negative connotation.

 - p15, 16: Since you won't have new preliminary for 3 GeV results, these two pages should remove?

 

I have removed them from the talk

 - p12: remove pT > 3.0 GeV  (also on p7)

 

I removed the mention of pTconst > 3 on slide 7, but I can find no mention of it on slide 12

On Wed, Sep 18, 2024 at 1:23 AM Yi Yang <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw> wrote:

Hi Gabe,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your consideration.
 - p1: Please add the DOE logo.
 - p9: Right plot, in the legend, the style looks the same for Proton and Kaon 
 - p10: Should it call "Problem"? Or "Challenge"?
 - p15, 16: Since you won't have new preliminary for 3 GeV results, these two pages should remove?
 - p12: remove pT > 3.0 GeV  (also on p7)

Cheers,
Yi

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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
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Subject:[[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Gabriel Dale-Gau for HP2024 submitted for review

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