STAR HardProbes PWG

[Sooraj Radhakrishnan <skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Gabe,

    Your slides are well prepared. In the interest of time, please find some comments from me here

S2: Do you want to show the lower bullets also in the order as you show the slides?

S5: You dont answer how QGP hadronizes from your study, right?

S9: Could indicated the PID purities here 

S12: y-axis label should say raw, dn --> dn_{track}?

S12: What are the vertical arrows on the right for?

S14: Are the combinatorial and matched distributions after scaling to the Au+Au spectra?

S15,16: Why not add a bullet comparing inclusive and in-jet ratios?

S23: last bullet text is overlapping

S28: y-axis should be labelled raw

Best,

Sooraj

On Fri, Sep 20, 2024 at 4:10 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gabe,

Thank you for working on some comments and improving your slides.
I have one suggestion on Slide#17,19 figure, where you compare R=0.2 and
0.3, 0.4 results for pp.
You are now using blue band for R=0.2 where you used data points with
box in slide15.

Can you please make plotting style the same without changing it to band?
You can make it different colour and marker style for R=0.2, 0.3, and
0.4 while comparing. Otherwise, it looks like you can comparing some
theory calculation just at a glance.

I am going to push it to startalk. But in the mean time please make your
plots consistent.


Best
Nihar

On 2024-09-20 04:00, Gabe Dale-Gau wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> Just wanted to make you aware that I have posted one more version of
> my slides to the talk page.
> Version 4:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HardProbes2024_BaryonToMesonInJet_v4.pdf
>
> This version includes a few updates I made today after a practice talk
> with my local group. The updates are as follows:
>
> - Slides 10-12: updated phrasing to improve clarity on "the challenge"
> that is addressed by pseudo-embedding.
> - Slides 17 & 19: Added a blue band representing my p+p R = 0.2 result
> to compare against p+p R = 0.3 and p+p R = 0.4. This strengthens my
> statement: "No modification observed with increase in Jet R".
> - All Results Slides: Corrected a typo in the legend for the p+p
> inclusive hadron measurement reference
> - Slide 21: Re-worked bullet points in summary for better logical
> flow.
>
> Sincerely,
>
> Gabe
>
> On Thu, Sep 19, 2024 at 12:38 PM Gabe Dale-Gau <gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi Yi,
>>
>> Thank you for the follow-up comments. I have included the changes in
>> v3 of my slides:
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HardProbes2024_BaryonToMesonInJet_v3.pdf
>> Please find detailed responses below.
>>
>> Sincerely,
>>
>> Gabe
>>
>> - Title page: there is an "official" DOE logo for the talk, you can
>> take a look at others. (Need to add "Supported in part by")
>>
>> Looked at Diptanil’s presentation for reference. Changed the logo
>> to the US department of energy office of science, and added
>> “supported in part by”
>>
>> - p21: I would suggest to make the plots smaller and bullets larger
>> in the summary page, but it is completely up to you.
>>
>> Done.
>>
>> On Thu, Sep 19, 2024 at 1:27 AM Yi Yang
>> <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Gabe,
>>
>> Thanks a lot for taking my suggestions into account and the updated
>> version. I have two minor comment/suggestion for your consideration.
>> - Title page: there is an "official" DOE logo for the talk, you can
>> take a look at others. (Need to add "Supported in part by")
>> - p21: I would suggest to make the plots smaller and bullets larger
>> in the summary page, but it is completely up to you.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
>> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
>> E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
>> Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
>> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>> -----Original message-----
>> From:Gabe Dale-Gau<gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>
>> To:star-hp-l<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>> Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2024 01:18:32
>> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Gabriel Dale-Gau
>> for HP2024 submitted for review
>> Hi Yi,
>>
>> Thank you for your comments on my presentation.
>> I have implemented all suggested changes in v2 of my slides:
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HardProbes2024_BaryonToMesonInJet_v2.pdf
>> [1]
>> Please find detailed responses below.
>>
>> Sincerely,
>>
>> Gabe
>>
>> - p1: Please add the DOE logo.
>>
>> Done
>>
>> - p9: Right plot, in the legend, the style looks the same for
>> Proton and Kaon
>>
>> Fixed.
>>
>> - p10: Should it call "Problem"? Or "Challenge"?
>>
>> I like this update. Changed to “The Challenge”. When I first
>> wrote these slides I was thinking of “Problem” as in “math
>> problem” or “problem set”, but I see now that the word could
>> be read as carrying a negative connotation.
>>
>> - p15, 16: Since you won't have new preliminary for 3 GeV results,
>> these two pages should remove?
>>
>> I have removed them from the talk
>>
>> - p12: remove pT > 3.0 GeV  (also on p7)
>>
>> I removed the mention of pTconst > 3 on slide 7, but I can find no
>> mention of it on slide 12
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 18, 2024 at 1:23 AM Yi Yang
>> <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw> wrote:
>> Hi Gabe,
>>
>> Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for
>> your consideration.
>> - p1: Please add the DOE logo.
>> - p9: Right plot, in the legend, the style looks the same for
>> Proton and Kaon
>> - p10: Should it call "Problem"? Or "Challenge"?
>> - p15, 16: Since you won't have new preliminary for 3 GeV results,
>> these two pages should remove?
>> - p12: remove pT > 3.0 GeV  (also on p7)
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Yi
>>
>> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>> Yi Yang, Research Fellow
>> Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
>> E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
>> Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
>> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>>
>> -----Original message-----
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Sooraj Radhakrishnan

Research Scientist,

Department of Physics

Kent State University

Kent, OH 44242

Physicist Postdoctoral Affiliate

Nuclear Science Division
Lawrence Berkeley National Lab
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Email: skradhakrishnan AT lbl.gov