STAR HardProbes PWG

[Gabe Dale-Gau <gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>]

Hi Yi,

Thank you for the follow-up comments. I have included the changes in v3 of my slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HardProbes2024_BaryonToMesonInJet_v3.pdf

Please find detailed responses below.

Sincerely,

Gabe

- Title page: there is an "official" DOE logo for the talk, you can take a look at others. (Need to add "Supported in part by")

 

Looked at Diptanil’s presentation for reference. Changed the logo to the US department of energy office of science, and added “supported in part by”

 

- p21: I would suggest to make the plots smaller and bullets larger in the summary page, but it is completely up to you.

 

Done.

On Thu, Sep 19, 2024 at 1:27 AM Yi Yang <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw> wrote:

Hi Gabe,

Thanks a lot for taking my suggestions into account and the updated version. I have two minor comment/suggestion for your consideration.

- Title page: there is an "official" DOE logo for the talk, you can take a look at others. (Need to add "Supported in part by")

- p21: I would suggest to make the plots smaller and bullets larger in the summary page, but it is completely up to you.

Cheers,

Yi

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E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
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From:Gabe Dale-Gau<gdaleg2 AT uic.edu>
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Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2024 01:18:32
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Gabriel Dale-Gau for HP2024 submitted for review

Hi Yi,

Thank you for your comments on my presentation.

I have implemented all suggested changes in v2 of my slides: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/HardProbes2024_BaryonToMesonInJet_v2.pdf

Please find detailed responses below.

Sincerely,

Gabe

 - p1: Please add the DOE logo.

 

Done

 - p9: Right plot, in the legend, the style looks the same for Proton and Kaon 

 

Fixed.

 - p10: Should it call "Problem"? Or "Challenge"?

 

I like this update. Changed to “The Challenge”. When I first wrote these slides I was thinking of “Problem” as in “math problem” or “problem set”, but I see now that the word could be read as carrying a negative connotation.

 - p15, 16: Since you won't have new preliminary for 3 GeV results, these two pages should remove?

 

I have removed them from the talk

 - p12: remove pT > 3.0 GeV  (also on p7)

 

I removed the mention of pTconst > 3 on slide 7, but I can find no mention of it on slide 12

On Wed, Sep 18, 2024 at 1:23 AM Yi Yang <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw> wrote:

Hi Gabe,

Thanks a lot for the nice slides. I have some minor comments for your consideration.
 - p1: Please add the DOE logo.
 - p9: Right plot, in the legend, the style looks the same for Proton and Kaon 
 - p10: Should it call "Problem"? Or "Challenge"?
 - p15, 16: Since you won't have new preliminary for 3 GeV results, these two pages should remove?
 - p12: remove pT > 3.0 GeV  (also on p7)

Cheers,
Yi

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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica
E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw
Tel: +886-2-2789-6709
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