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[<Ondrej.Lomicky AT seznam.cz>]

Hi Yi,

thank you very much for your suggestions, I addressed all comments:
1. General: It would be nice to have a part briefly introducing STAR, like TPC, around Section II...

-> I added information about the detectors to Chapter 2 (As I reached the 4-page limit, I do not have much space for a longer introduction)
2. L49: reference for DGLAP equation

-> Added

3. L54: Please define R_CP first.

-> Added

4. L57: It would be nice to have a conclusion on the model comparison.
-> I added to the summary sentence about concluding the model comparison. (Again the 4-page limit)

The new version is here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-rm-D0-Meson-Tagged-Jets-AuAu-Collisions-sqrtsrm-NN-200-GeV-1

Cheers,
Ondřej

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Datum: 19. 9. 2024 8:01:27
Předmět: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for SQM-2024 submitted for review

Hi Ondrej,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings and sorry for the late reply.
I have some minor comments for your consideration.
- General: It would be nice to have a part briefly introducing STAR, like TPC, around Section II...
- L49: reference for DGLAP equation?
- L54: Please define R_CP first.
- L57: It would be nice to have a conclusion on the model comparison.

Cheers,
Yi


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Subject:[[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for SQM-2024 submitted for review

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Ondrej Lomicky (lomicond AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material for a review,
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