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[<Ondrej.Lomicky AT seznam.cz>]

Hi Barbara,

thank you for your comments, I addressed all of them:

1. Section 3: here you need to add a few sentences: describe more what each plot on Fig. 1 shows, give some conclusions, write a few words about the model and what is the conclusion from its comparison to the data. Moving what you have in the summary should be enough, and at the end you can just briefly write what was measured.
->  I moved the part in the summary to Chapter 2 and slightly reformulated it.
2. L84: Is it RCP(∆r) ? I think ∆r for it's just a ratio, please check
-> No, it is not RCP(∆r) You are right. I rewrote all sentences related to these ratios.

3. If you make the Fig. 2 smaller, you could also fit the R_CP vs pT figure next to it (I would actually make an order R_CP vs pT, z and then the delta r distributions). And you can then consider shortening the generalized angularties text, if you exceed 4 pages.

-> Done.
4. References: you probably don't need doi.
-> It was written as an example in the template, but the others do not have it either. I deleted them and saved a few lines. :)

The new version is available here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-rm-D0-Meson-Tagged-Jets-AuAu-Collisions-sqrtsrm-NN-200-GeV-1

Cheers,
Ondřej


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Od: Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>
Komu: star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov
Datum: 19. 9. 2024 12:34:40
Předmět: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for SQM-2024 submitted for review

Hi Ondrej,

Nice proceedings. Please find below a few comments

- Section 3: here you need to add a few sentences: describe more what each plot on Fig. 1 shows, give some conclusions, write a few words about the model and what is the conclusion from its comparison to the data. Moving what you have in the summary should be enough, and at the end you can just briefly write what was measured.

- L84: Is it RCP(∆r) ? I think ∆r for it's just a ratio, please check

- If you make the Fig. 2 smaller, you could also fit the R_CP vs pT figure next to it (I would actually make an order R_CP vs pT, z and then the delta r distributions). And you can then consider shortening the generalized angularties text, if you exceed 4 pages.

- References: you probably don't need doi.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Thu, Sep 19, 2024 at 11:53 AM <Ondrej.Lomicky AT seznam.cz> wrote:

Hi Yi,

thank you very much for your suggestions, I addressed all comments:
1. General: It would be nice to have a part briefly introducing STAR, like TPC, around Section II...

-> I added information about the detectors to Chapter 2 (As I reached the 4-page limit, I do not have much space for a longer introduction)
2. L49: reference for DGLAP equation

-> Added

3. L54: Please define R_CP first.

-> Added

4. L57: It would be nice to have a conclusion on the model comparison.
-> I added to the summary sentence about concluding the model comparison. (Again the 4-page limit)

The new version is here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-rm-D0-Meson-Tagged-Jets-AuAu-Collisions-sqrtsrm-NN-200-GeV-1

Cheers,
Ondřej

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Od: Yi Yang <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>
Komu: star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Datum: 19. 9. 2024 8:01:27
Předmět: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Ondrej Lomicky for SQM-2024 submitted for review

Hi Ondrej,

Thanks a lot for the nice proceedings and sorry for the late reply.
I have some minor comments for your consideration.
- General: It would be nice to have a part briefly introducing STAR, like TPC, around Section II...
- L49: reference for DGLAP equation?
- L54: Please define R_CP first.
- L57: It would be nice to have a conclusion on the model comparison.

Cheers,
Yi


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