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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Jitka,

One general comment on the poster is that it’s quite text-heavy. Full sentences aren’t required, which may help you reduce the wordiness, and make it easier to read from any reasonable distance. I have some other specific comments below.

Thanks,

Isaac

Bottom-left: How do we get from the plot that “higher energies show stronger [relative] suppression than small systems”? The ALICE data at 5.02 TeV and STAR data at 200 GeV are about consistent, and if anything the NA50 data at 17.3 GeV seems to exhibit more relative suppression. The structure of the sentence also doesn’t make a lot of sense to me.

Top-right: The box “Production of J/psi vs Multiplicity” doesn’t have any physics motivation. The "J/psi Production within Jets” panel has a similar lack of motivation.

On Nov 20, 2024, at 12:31, Mrazkova, Jitka <jitka.mrazkova AT fjfi.cvut.cz> wrote:

Dear conveners,

I would like to kindly ask you for your comments on my poster for the Zimanyi School. (I was originally supposed to give a talk, but it has been changed to a poster.)

Best regards

Jitka Mrazkova

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Jitka Mrazkova (jitkam7 AT seznam.cz) has submitted a material for a review,  
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