STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mrazkova, Jitka" <jitka.mrazkova AT fjfi.cvut.cz>]

Dear Qian,

thank you for your comments, I implemented them in the poster (v2).

I'm sorry, I'm just not entirely sure what you mean by the comment on the Psi(2S) part. Should I elaborate more on the difference between the ALICE vs STAR data (higher vs lower collision energies) or the p+(W, Ag) and d+Au systems (right part of the plot)? I wasn't sure what other conclusions to draw from the plot (so that they are correct and also not to add too much text) so I only included the mention about suppression in the STAR data so far.

Best regards

Jitka

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Hello Jitka

   Please find my comments below:

Inclusive J/Psi RAA part, these two statement are not accurate
  Energy dependence can be described by the transport model -> energy
dependence is qualitatively described by transport model.
   We can not concluded on RAA centrality dependence -> Hint of
decreasing trend is more suitable
Psi(2S) part, do you want to conclude something on copper of STAR with
NA51 and other experiment?
J/Psi in Jets Part, We can not say a light increase near z=1 with
current error bars

Qian Yang

On 2024-11-22 04:21, Mooney, Isaac wrote:
> Hi Jitka,
>
> I think this is sufficient — it looks much better.
>
> Thanks,
> Isaac
>
>> On Nov 21, 2024, at 13:16, Mrazkova, Jitka
>> <jitka.mrazkova AT fjfi.cvut.cz> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Isaac,
>>
>> thank you for your comments. I tried to reduce the amount of text
>> (and also increased the text size). Please let me know if I should
>> attempt to adjust it more.
>>
>> Best regards,
>> Jitka
>>
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>>
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>> <star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Mooney, Isaac
>> <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
>> Sent: Wednesday, November 20, 2024 11:09 PM
>> To: star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>> Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Jitka Mrazkova for
>> Zimanyi School 2024 submitted for review
>>
>> Hi Jitka,
>>
>> One general comment on the poster is that it’s quite text-heavy.
>> Full sentences aren’t required, which may help you reduce the
>> wordiness, and make it easier to read from any reasonable distance.
>> I have some other specific comments below.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Isaac
>>
>> Bottom-left: How do we get from the plot that “higher energies
>> show stronger [relative] suppression than small systems”? The
>> ALICE data at 5.02 TeV and STAR data at 200 GeV are about
>> consistent, and if anything the NA50 data at 17.3 GeV seems to
>> exhibit more relative suppression. The structure of the sentence
>> also doesn’t make a lot of sense to me.
>>
>> Top-right: The box “Production of J/psi vs Multiplicity”
>> doesn’t have any physics motivation. The "J/psi Production within
>> Jets” panel has a similar lack of motivation.
>>
>>> On Nov 20, 2024, at 12:31, Mrazkova, Jitka
>>> <jitka.mrazkova AT fjfi.cvut.cz> wrote:
>>>
>>> Dear conveners,
>>>
>>> I would like to kindly ask you for your comments on my poster for
>>> the Zimanyi School. (I was originally supposed to give a talk, but
>>> it has been changed to a poster.)
>>>
>>> Best regards
>>> Jitka Mrazkova
>>>
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>>>
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>>> Subject: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Jitka Mrazkova for
>>> Zimanyi School 2024 submitted for review
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>>> Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>
>>> Jitka Mrazkova (jitkam7 AT seznam.cz) has submitted a material for a
>>> review,
>>> please have a look:
>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69948
>>>
>>> Deadline: 2024-12-02
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