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[John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>]

Hi Hal, all,

	In reviewing my slides, I have a question about the "charge question" 
indicators on the various slides.  Has someone checked that the ones in 
the templates are correct?  And which charge are we referring to, the 
(simplified) one for the DR or the one for the actual NSF review?
	For example, I notice the "Technical Progress" slide in the template 
has CQ-2.a.  The DR charge has charge questions a through k, and has 
nothing like 2.a??  So this does not agree with the actual charge that 
the DR committee will be using??  This suggest the CQ are actually 
referring to the NSF review charge.  However, 2.a there (taken from p. 
30 of Mike's slides) is all about uncosted labor and how it is tracked; 
so this slides does not seem to refer to it either??

	I know putting the CQ on each slide is to help the committee write 
their closeout.  However, it is not going to help if we are pointing to 
the wrong CQ!

        Regards,
                John

On 2/15/23 2:57 PM, Evans, Harold G. wrote:
> Dear NSF L2s,
>
> After a pass through the LAr L2 talk, there are a couple of changes 
> we're proposing to make to the L2 template. I've updated the file in 
> google slides so you can see the changes, and there's a brief 
> description below.
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NHbjHSzobhhdJmsYbPSpEssTM8XKPCmAApRoBxGMs5g/edit?usp=sharing__;!!P4SdNyxKAPE!Hxy34O5Qg2qT61HaG5cwRQ7YNAdGw3KV7TtYlIlWcScp0rGM9_Sl3i0QlXUowhtWCe91lt4nilm3oV5gwZEllVRwReVl7gizLscMCF15J5H8cdmliPRREw$
>   
> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NHbjHSzobhhdJmsYbPSpEssTM8XKPCmAApRoBxGMs5g/edit?usp=sharing__;!!P4SdNyxKAPE!Bvk8Ugw5KuZTEJ9_BFWGpsByZfAIl5z7sgZj4nbzU7pnflRKqOq-Aj6HYcLlh4bgtQnHlHfurOfctpZ-KSWsqri41LeUg-gR1tHLzazy-bxfd6Q$>
>
> 1. The term "(rebaselining)" is mis-leading when it's used with "World 
> Events" since the entire project is being rebaselined. We propose to 
> remove the qualifiers (rebaselining) and (contingency) from World Events 
> and Know Risks labels respectively.
> Slides affected: 16,17,18
>
> 2. Trying to put the FDR and new Summary schedules side-by-side makes 
> them both unreadable. So just show the new schedule on slide 14, but 
> include an "x" in the new schedule to indicate where the FDR 
> end-of-production dates occured. It's probably useful to have the 
> (not-so-readable) schedule comparison slide in the backup in case the 
> reviewers want to see the actual comparison.
> Slides affected: 14 + new backup
>
> Let me know if there are any questions, or any other suggestions.
>
> Thanks  -  Hal
>
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