STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Debasish,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my suggestions below :

    1. Please shorten both title and abstract. some sentences at the 
beginning of the abstract can be merged into introduction.
    2.  Line 36, proton-deuteron -> proton-deuteron correlations
    3. Line 40, due -> due to
    4. Line 42, add to -> enhance
    5. Line 59, you may add reference for eff. correction and CBWC.
    6. Line 49, To ensure good quality of the event sample, selection 
criteria on vertex position and pile-up contributions are applied. this 
sentence is not needed.
    7. Line 91, delete "publicly available code"
    8. Line 98, co-efficient -> coefficient
    9. Please explain how the coalescence calculation is done in your 
calculation. Wigner function or hard cut on relative momentum and distance.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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