STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Debasish,

I was going through your nice proceedings and found something to correct 
on.
Please find my suggestions and comment below only on your introduction.

Line18-19:
"... study the phases of strongly interacting matter under extreme 
conditions such as temperature and/or pressure."

This statement is not correct especially "study the phases of strongly 
interacting matter". you could rephrase like "study the phases of 
matter"; note here that QGP (hot-dense QCD matter, that is strongly 
interacting matter) and hadronic matter are those phases.

Line20: "gives direct opportunity" -> "gives a direct opportunity"

Line21: "...this new state of matter" you did not mention what is that 
new state of matter. For example Quark-Gluon Plasma, etc.
You need to introduce QGP somewhere in the introduction that you have 
not.

Line 22:"...within thermal statistical model... " -> "... within the 
thermal statistical model ..."

Line27: "energies is of the " -> "energies are of the ..."; "only few 
MeV," -> "only a few MeV,"

Line30: "close-by " -> "close by"

Line32: "elliptic" -> "the elliptic"

LIne36: " and proton-deuteron are"  Need to mention higher order 
cumulant of proton-deuteron correlations or distribution.

Rest I have not gone through due to my limited time.

Regards,
Nihar


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