STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Debasish Mallick <dmallick AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you very much for your suggestions.

Please find the updated draft with your suggestions implemented in the 
same link as follows.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60407

Thank you,
with best regards,
Debasish




On 2022-07-27 16:18, Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Hi Debasish,
>
>     Nice proceedings.
>     Please find my suggestions below :
>
>     1. Please shorten both title and abstract. some sentences at the
> beginning of the abstract can be merged into introduction.
>     2.  Line 36, proton-deuteron -> proton-deuteron correlations
>     3. Line 40, due -> due to
>     4. Line 42, add to -> enhance
>     5. Line 59, you may add reference for eff. correction and CBWC.
>     6. Line 49, To ensure good quality of the event sample, selection
> criteria on vertex position and pile-up contributions are applied.
> this sentence is not needed.
>     7. Line 91, delete "publicly available code"
>     8. Line 98, co-efficient -> coefficient
>     9. Please explain how the coalescence calculation is done in your
> calculation. Wigner function or hard cut on relative momentum and
> distance.
>
>     With those implemented, I sign off.
>
> Thank you,
> Best Regards,
> Xiaofeng
>
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