STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Debasish Mallick <dmallick AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Hanna,

Thank you very much for your suggestions.
Please find the updated draft in the same link as follows.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60407

For the bootstrap method line, I have added references to the STAR 
net-proton long paper and a model study paper. I hope these two 
references will help the reader.
For Fig-1: I have checked and found that the central 0-5% points were 
preliminary. I have modified the figure to keep only the preliminary 
points.


Thank you very much,
With best regards,
Debasish



On 2022-07-27 05:25, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Dear Debasish,
>
> I think your page limit is 6 pages.
> Your proceedings is longer, please make it shorter.
> Can you please add line numbers?
>
> Page 2, 4th line: MeVs -> MeV
>
> Page 2/3: I suggest to explain more details about the bootstrap
> method, or to remove this sentence
> Figurę 1: is it preliminary plot? Please add a label.
>
> Figurę 2: please increase the figure little bit (fonts are tiny), add
> preliminary labels.
>
> Thanks,
> Hanna
>
> Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
> PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
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