STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Dylan Neff <dneffucla AT gmail.com>]

Hi Toshihiro,

 

Thank you for your suggestions. I’ve made these revisions and posted the updated version. The word count is about 250 so I think still good.

 

 

Thanks,

Dylan Neff

 

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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

 

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material 

originally submitted by Dylan Neff ( dneff AT physics.ucla.edu ) at

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Probing-nature-QCD-phase-transition-higher-order-net-proton-number-f

 

Comment:

Dear Dylan,

 

Thanks for the revised draft.

 

I have another few suggestions:

 

- L3: baryon chemical potential

 

- Please add some references for

-- Negative C5/C1 and C6/C2

-- Special ordering of cumulants

-- local parton density fluctuations

-- factorial cumulants (two-component prediction)

-- Then please check the length limit (<350 words)

 

With these implemented, I sign off.

 

Best regards,

Toshihiro

 

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