STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Yevhenia,

As Hanna commented, your poster will read further better if you can shorten some sentences.

Other than that, your poster looks very nice and I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

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Dear Yevheniia,

Femtoscopy section, particles emission figure. If I remember correctly, I think you just need to repeat the [2] reference.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com> w dniu 25.08.2023, o godz. 22:46:

Dear Hanna, 

> "add references to figures that are not prepared by you"

Can you please clarify what figures do you mean? 

Best,

Yevheniia

On Fri, Aug 25, 2023, 4:12 AM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yevhenia,

Please find my comments on your nice poster.

I have a general comment to consider that instead of full sentences, you can try to make these statements shorter (Femtoscopy part).

Please define k_T and add references to figures that are not prepared by you.

Please add the formula that is used in Levy fit

With those considered, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

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Faculty of Physics

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Koszykowa 75

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00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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