STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>]

Dear Mate,

Thank you for noticing!

I updated the poster.

Thanks,

Yevheniia 

On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 11:26 AM Mate Csanad <csanad AT bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yevheniia,

Thanks for all this, let me just mention one thing: the formula should in fact be
(q_i * q_j * R^2_{i,j})^(alpha/2)
so that for diagonal sources it is
(q_i^2 * R^2_{i,i})^(alpha/2) = q_i^alpha * R^alpha_{i,i}
and for a spherically symmetric source, it is
|q*R|^alpha,
but for the poster you only need the first formula above.

Thanks, best regards,
Mate

2023. 08. 26. 16:43 keltezéssel, Eugenia Khyzhniak via Star-cf-l írta:
> Dear Hanna and Toshihiro,
> Thank you for the comments! I updated my poster.
> I tried to shorten a bit femtoscopy part, added link to "homogeneity region",
> added kT definition and updated fit function to make it suitable for both
> Gaussian and Levy.
> Best,
> Yevheniia
>
> On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 9:50 AM 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov
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>     Dear Yevhenia,
>
>     As Hanna commented, your poster will read further better if you can shorten
>     some sentences.
>
>     Other than that, your poster looks very nice and I sign off.
>
>     Best regards,
>     Toshihiro
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>     Dear Yevheniia,
>
>     Femtoscopy section, particles emission figure. If I remember correctly, I
>     think you just need to repeat the [2] reference.
>
>     Thanks,
>     Hanna
>
>
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>>     Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com
>>     <mailto:eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>> w dniu 25.08.2023, o godz. 22:46:
>>
>>     Dear Hanna,
>>     > "add references to figures that are not prepared by you"
>>     Can you please clarify what figures do you mean?
>>     Best,
>>     Yevheniia
>>
>>     On Fri, Aug 25, 2023, 4:12 AM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l
>>     <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov <mailto:star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>> wrote:
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>>         Dear Yevhenia,
>>
>>         Please find my comments on your nice poster.
>>
>>         I have a general comment to consider that instead of full sentences,
>>         you can try to make these statements shorter (Femtoscopy part).
>>         Please define k_T and add references to figures that are not prepared
>>         by you.
>>         Please add the formula that is used in Levy fit
>>
>>         With those considered, I sign off.
>>         Thanks,
>>         Hanna
>>
>>         *Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk*
>>         PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
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