STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>]

Dear Hanna and Toshihiro,

Thank you for the comments! I updated my poster.

I tried to shorten a bit femtoscopy part, added link to "homogeneity region", added kT definition and updated fit function to make it suitable for both Gaussian and Levy.

Best, 

Yevheniia 

On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 9:50 AM 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yevhenia,

As Hanna commented, your poster will read further better if you can shorten some sentences.

Other than that, your poster looks very nice and I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

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Dear Yevheniia,

Femtoscopy section, particles emission figure. If I remember correctly, I think you just need to repeat the [2] reference.

Thanks,

Hanna

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Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com> w dniu 25.08.2023, o godz. 22:46:

Dear Hanna, 

> "add references to figures that are not prepared by you"

Can you please clarify what figures do you mean? 

Best,

Yevheniia

On Fri, Aug 25, 2023, 4:12 AM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yevhenia,

Please find my comments on your nice poster.

I have a general comment to consider that instead of full sentences, you can try to make these statements shorter (Femtoscopy part).

Please define k_T and add references to figures that are not prepared by you.

Please add the formula that is used in Levy fit

With those considered, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

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Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

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00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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