STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Grigory Nigmatkulov <nigmatkulov AT gmail.com>]

Hi Yevheniia,

 

STAR Management has asked me to take a look at a few posters, including yours. The poster looks very nice. 

Please find some minor suggestions below:

- Section name: Charge dependent correlations -> Charge-dependent correlation

- In the same section the bottom figures do not have STAR Preliminary label. Please add.

- For the Levy-stable Sources section I suggest to update “STAR Run-11 preliminary” to “STAR Preliminary”

Cheers,

Grigory

On Aug 29, 2023, at 7:40 AM, Eugenia Khyzhniak via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Hanna and Toshihiro, 

Do you happen to have any farther comments?

Thanks, 

Yevheniia 

On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 2:06 PM Mate Csanad <csanad AT bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yevheniia,

Perfect, thank you!

Best regards,
Mate

2023. 08. 26. 19:37 keltezéssel, Eugenia Khyzhniak írta:
> Dear Mate,
>
> Thank you for noticing!
> I updated the poster.
>
> Thanks,
> Yevheniia
>
> On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 11:26 AM Mate Csanad <csanad AT bnl.gov
> <mailto:csanad AT bnl.gov>> wrote:
>
>     Dear Yevheniia,
>
>     Thanks for all this, let me just mention one thing: the formula should in
>     fact be
>     (q_i * q_j * R^2_{i,j})^(alpha/2)
>     so that for diagonal sources it is
>     (q_i^2 * R^2_{i,i})^(alpha/2) = q_i^alpha * R^alpha_{i,i}
>     and for a spherically symmetric source, it is
>     |q*R|^alpha,
>     but for the poster you only need the first formula above.
>
>     Thanks, best regards,
>     Mate
>
>     2023. 08. 26. 16:43 keltezéssel, Eugenia Khyzhniak via Star-cf-l írta:
>      > Dear Hanna and Toshihiro,
>      > Thank you for the comments! I updated my poster.
>      > I tried to shorten a bit femtoscopy part, added link to "homogeneity
>     region",
>      > added kT definition and updated fit function to make it suitable for both
>      > Gaussian and Levy.
>      > Best,
>      > Yevheniia
>      >
>      > On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 9:50 AM 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l
>     <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov <mailto:star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
>      > <mailto:star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov <mailto:star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>>> wrote:
>      >
>      >     Dear Yevhenia,
>      >
>      >     As Hanna commented, your poster will read further better if you can
>     shorten
>      >     some sentences.
>      >
>      >     Other than that, your poster looks very nice and I sign off.
>      >
>      >     Best regards,
>      >     Toshihiro
>      >   
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>      >     *送信日時:* 2023年8月26日 21:16
>      >     *宛先:* Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com
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>      >     *件名:* Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yevheniia Khyzhniak for
>     Quark
>      >     Matter 2023 submitted for review
>      >     Dear Yevheniia,
>      >
>      >     Femtoscopy section, particles emission figure. If I remember correctly, I
>      >     think you just need to repeat the [2] reference.
>      >
>      >     Thanks,
>      >     Hanna
>      >
>      >
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>     dniu 25.08.2023, o godz. 22:46:
>      >>
>      >>     Dear Hanna,
>      >>     > "add references to figures that are not prepared by you"
>      >>     Can you please clarify what figures do you mean?
>      >>     Best,
>      >>     Yevheniia
>      >>
>      >>     On Fri, Aug 25, 2023, 4:12 AM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l
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>      >>
>      >>         Dear Yevhenia,
>      >>
>      >>         Please find my comments on your nice poster.
>      >>
>      >>         I have a general comment to consider that instead of full sentences,
>      >>         you can try to make these statements shorter (Femtoscopy part).
>      >>         Please define k_T and add references to figures that are not
>     prepared
>      >>         by you.
>      >>         Please add the formula that is used in Levy fit
>      >>
>      >>         With those considered, I sign off.
>      >>         Thanks,
>      >>         Hanna
>      >>
>      >>         *Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk*
>      >>         PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
>      >>
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