STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Ziyang,

Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract.

Not sure, if you have presented such measurement and discussed at 
HP-pwg.
In case I missed it, can you please point to your precious 
presentations?

Title:
"Very low pT dimuon…" -> "Dimuon production at low transverse momentum 
in peripheral Au+Au…"
Here no need to use "Very" and title needs rephrase as above.
L2: "…photons, leading …" -"photons leading


Thank you
Nihar




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