STAR HardProbes PWG

[zli1 <zli1 AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Barbara,

Thanks for your nice comments, I upload a new version. The previous 
version (v3) is also enclosed for your reference.

Best,
Ziyang
On 2023-02-23 16:22, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> Hi Ziyang,
>
> no problem.
> The new version looks good.
> But if I might suggest, I would shorten a bit the introduction part
> and instead add a sentence related to the model comparison, that I
> think you had before.
>
> Cheers,
> Barbara
>
> On Thu, Feb 23, 2023 at 9:19 AM zli1 via Star-hp-l
> <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear Conveners,
> >
> > I just found the ATHIC abstract has a limit of 1000 chars, so I
> > edited
> > out some words and upload
> > a new version (v4), please have a look. I'm very sorry about that.
> >
> > The deadline for abstract submission is extended to March 10.
> >
> > Best,
> > Ziyang
> >
> > On 2023-02-20 23:34, zli1 via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > Hi Barbara,
> > >
> > > Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version.
> > >
> > > Best,
> > > Ziyang
> > > On 2023-02-20 23:09, Barbara Trzeciak wrote:
> > > > Hi Ziyang,
> > > >
> > > > nice abstract. I sign off with minor comments.
> > > >
> > > > L16: datasets, which -> datasets.
> > > > (this sentence is quite long)
> > > > L16-17: which are complementary to the previous dielectron
> > results. ->
> > > > These measurements are complementary to the previous dielectron
> > > > results.
> > > >
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > Barbara
> > > >
> > > > On Mon, Feb 20, 2023 at 4:43 AM Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l
> > > > <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Hello Ziyang,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you for pointing these slides. I missed these.
> > > > > Looking forward to seeing you new updates.
> > > > >
> > > > > I have no further comments, I sign off.
> > > > >
> > > > > Regards
> > > > > Nihar
> > > > >
> > > > > On 2023-02-20 08:27, zli1 wrote:
> > > > > > Hello Nihar,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thanks for your comments, I upload a new version and please
> > find
> > > > > my
> > > > > > recent presentations in below link:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Collaboration meeting-September 2022 :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/STARmeeting_20220912_lzy_v3_0.pdf
> > > > > > preliminary request :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/zli1/Run14-very-low-pT-Jpsi-preliminary-request
> > > > > > This abstract also includes low mass dilepton pairs, which is
> > the
> > > > > work
> > > > > > from Jian Zhou, so the presentation will be similar to my talk
> > in
> > > > > > ICHEP2022 :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICHEP-2022/Very-low-pT-di-muon-production-peripheral-AuAu-collisions%E2%80%A8-200-GeV-STAR
> > > > > > Best,
> > > > > > Ziyang
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On 2023-02-20 00:18, Nihar Sahoo via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > > Hello Ziyang,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Not sure, if you have presented such measurement and discussed
> > at
> > > > > > > HP-pwg.
> > > > > > > In case I missed it, can you please point to your precious
> > > > > > > presentations?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Title:
> > > > > > > "Very low pT dimuon…" -> "Dimuon production at low
> > transverse
> > > > > momentum
> > > > > > > in peripheral Au+Au…"
> > > > > > > Here no need to use "Very" and title needs rephrase as above.
> > > > > > > L2: "…photons, leading …" -"photons leading
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Thank you
> > > > > > > Nihar
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > On 2023-02-17 13:34, webmaster--- via Star-hp-l wrote:
> > > > > > > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Ziyang Li (lzy9404 AT mail.ustc.edu.cn) has submitted a material
> > > > > for a
> > > > > > > > review,
> > > > > > > > please have a look:
> > > > > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62633
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Deadline: 2023-02-28
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